1. get health
2. exercise will
3. never give up
Climbing mountains is a very popular sport for young people, but it is a very perilous and hard sport. If you want to be a successful climber, you have to own gift and force. Joe and Simon were talented mountain climbers.
First of all, they have got health from this sport. “Touching the Void” is a true story about Joe and Simon climb mountains. They will have faced the threatening weather and accomplished the climbing. So they had to exercise their body before climbing. In addition, climbing mountains has exercised their will. In order to achieve the aim, they have to overcome the threatening weather and varied topography’s effect to accomplish their mission. They have learned own stubborn will, and they reached the summit. Finally, they have learned never give up. Joe broke his leg, and Simon helped him in any way, but Joe also descended and fell into a crevice. If Joe gives up escape out from the crevice, he will die. Joe didn’t give up, and he crawled hardly and climbed use another leg. Finally, he found Simon and saved himself.
In conclusion, Joe and Simon got a lot of benefits from climbing mountains. This story tells us that our life is very valuable. We have to treasure and cherish it. We need to have staunch will to face hard anything.
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Wednesday, May 25, 2011
Monday, May 16, 2011
Rewrite: PCC's ESL Program
1. Strict
2. Practical
3. helpful
There are ESL programs in many schools in Los Angeles. Choosing a suitable school is very important for students. I have good reasons why I chose PCC's ESL program.
First of all, PCC's ESL program is a strict program. There are a lot of professional professors, and they are very responsible and patient. Students are trained and have to reach the levels of what the professors asked. Students have to study and practice for many tests. The practices can quickly improved students' ability of ESL of listening, speaking, readinig, and writing. In addition, PCC's ESL program are very practical for students. While students take ESL classes, they can try to take other subjects' classes. ESL program is the basic of learn other subjects. Students can use ESL knowledges right now when they learn other subjects. PCC has many practical subjects and career training certificates programs by students and employers welcome. Finally, PCC's ESL program is very helpful for students. PCC has ESL Center and Reading Center for ESL students. There are many DVDs, many kinds of books, and tutors. Students can use the materials and resources in ESL Center. Tutors can help students on grammar, writing and pronunciation. The ESL Center and The Reading Center have improved our listening, writing, and reading ability.
In conclusion, PCC's ESL Program have helped students quickly improve use English's ability. Students are much better to exchange in English on study and life. So PCC's ESL Program is a great program for students.
2. Practical
3. helpful
There are ESL programs in many schools in Los Angeles. Choosing a suitable school is very important for students. I have good reasons why I chose PCC's ESL program.
First of all, PCC's ESL program is a strict program. There are a lot of professional professors, and they are very responsible and patient. Students are trained and have to reach the levels of what the professors asked. Students have to study and practice for many tests. The practices can quickly improved students' ability of ESL of listening, speaking, readinig, and writing. In addition, PCC's ESL program are very practical for students. While students take ESL classes, they can try to take other subjects' classes. ESL program is the basic of learn other subjects. Students can use ESL knowledges right now when they learn other subjects. PCC has many practical subjects and career training certificates programs by students and employers welcome. Finally, PCC's ESL program is very helpful for students. PCC has ESL Center and Reading Center for ESL students. There are many DVDs, many kinds of books, and tutors. Students can use the materials and resources in ESL Center. Tutors can help students on grammar, writing and pronunciation. The ESL Center and The Reading Center have improved our listening, writing, and reading ability.
In conclusion, PCC's ESL Program have helped students quickly improve use English's ability. Students are much better to exchange in English on study and life. So PCC's ESL Program is a great program for students.
Sunday, May 15, 2011
Rewrite: Learning Ways I Prefer
1. Visual
2. Auditory
3. Reflective
There are a few ways I prefer for learning. Usually there are a lot of ways for learning, but I think that choosing some appropriate ways to study are very important. They can help me quickly improve. First of all, I like a visual learning style. I think that it is a easy and general way to study. I can read books, auxiliary materials, and magazines anywhere. I use my eyes to see and understand other things. PCC Library provides several levels books for students that can quickly improve my vocabulary quantity. In addition, I am good at auditory learning style. Listening can make us understand what we want to know. We listen to others, and learn with teachers. It make our listening more and more good. I listen to the radio, a CD, and TV that it practice my listening a lot. Last of all, I like a reflective learning style. When I see a thing, it gives me an image in my brain. I can make it connect with knowledge that I studied. I can try to describe in new language when I see something. Also, I can try to talk with other people who can speak English. This way can practice my reflective ability. In conclusion, appropriate learning ways can improve my level of English very much. They can aviod me take a wrong ways and waste much time, and make me study more effectively.
2. Auditory
3. Reflective
There are a few ways I prefer for learning. Usually there are a lot of ways for learning, but I think that choosing some appropriate ways to study are very important. They can help me quickly improve. First of all, I like a visual learning style. I think that it is a easy and general way to study. I can read books, auxiliary materials, and magazines anywhere. I use my eyes to see and understand other things. PCC Library provides several levels books for students that can quickly improve my vocabulary quantity. In addition, I am good at auditory learning style. Listening can make us understand what we want to know. We listen to others, and learn with teachers. It make our listening more and more good. I listen to the radio, a CD, and TV that it practice my listening a lot. Last of all, I like a reflective learning style. When I see a thing, it gives me an image in my brain. I can make it connect with knowledge that I studied. I can try to describe in new language when I see something. Also, I can try to talk with other people who can speak English. This way can practice my reflective ability. In conclusion, appropriate learning ways can improve my level of English very much. They can aviod me take a wrong ways and waste much time, and make me study more effectively.
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